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Flash Reviews: 18
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18 Reviews | 5 w/ Responses
Hey the animations,graphics and voice was super
Don't listen to the people below i doubt they can even make something creative
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hahah best one i've seen so far xDD should be frontpaged like the others
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again, no real review but a suggestion.
ever head of point prospective?
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /98074
check it out it can really help on your background work
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Hey whats that song playing on the background?
sorry cant be asked to review this
thanks
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The best animation i've seen in ages haha.... so many funny parts you dont even have to see the movie to understand whats going on.
Story 15/10
animation 9/10
graphics 7/10
although the graphics did kinda get bad on some bits it looked like you put real effort. well thats the only thing to criticize so... good luck on your next flashes :D
Author's Response:
Thanks! near the end some of the things were a little cleaner I think, but I will try to make the next cartoon I make a little smoother.
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Love your Drawing style and your beautiful background.
Don't really have any critism lol your too good ^^.
oh and Gratz on winning the wacom contest
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, winning the tablet surprised the hell out of me ^.^ It's a happy day
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Very addicting
sorry for not writing a full review
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DUDE! HOW?!?!
Ever time!! it guessed right!! you gotta tell me how it knows!!
So good!
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I remember you from a few days ago.
I reviewed your 'the waiter' submission ever read it?
anyways i can see an improvment but you still need to work on shit.
for instance i see you doing squigerly lines everywhere; it does'nt work try actually filling them in and then adding detail like shading
Now this aint a very structured review,like my other one, but thats cause i cant be bothered anyway you need to work on your backgrounds and the perportions of your people. to be real you need to work on everything i'd really like you to do better please reply to this if you get it lol then i'd know you read this altho this might get bammed
PM me if you need help or something of the sort
Author's Response:
you know whats funny I acyually made this before the waiter, but i put a shitload more work into this one to actually make people believe it.
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its too late for one of my long ass reviews so im just gonna say what i think
i love it but its too short i feel like giving you a 10/10 because it would be awesome if you made it longer its awesome for a first time
Author's Response:
Ok, I will make my future movies longer!!
Thank you for such a nice comment!!
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